Remnantmods

This is my 1st task for uni...opinions/suggestions?

V1: http://www.upload3r.com/serve/290908/1222720740.jpg
V2: http://www.upload3r.com/serve/290908/1222721311.jpg
V3: http://www.upload3r.com/serve/290908/1222721417.jpg

Looks sick, I don't like the font in any of them but I can get over it. Maybe fade the white line on Sonic's leg?

Your first task for Uni... what exactly did I miss?

Zieon Eslador wrote:Your first task for Uni... what exactly did I miss?

what do you mean by that?

xzodia wrote:

Zieon Eslador wrote:Your first task for Uni... what exactly did I miss?

what do you mean by that?

As in, "Excuse meh for mah newbishness, but what are this Uni you speaks of?"
I have a feeling I should already know... but I don't.

I think he's talking about the University of Northern Iowa.

OwnZ joO wrote:I think he's talking about the University of Northern Iowa.

umm no...University of Abertay Dundee (I don't live in America >_>)

[V2] Keeps your ideas together, and does not force the mind to "roam" the image too much, which brings be to my second point:

Roaming: you have three distinct focal points in your image far from each other, a usual rule for advertisement posters is you have to grab the attention quickly and get your message across in just a few seconds, people barely glance at a poster for more than a few seconds. I would suggest trying to minimize the background swirls presence, and capitalize on your text and background characters in a more central position, create the background to draw the eye towards your true center-of-focus, the message.

Text: Your text is not immediately registrable and can "blend" into the background too much. I would try creating more contrast between the text and the background image like a glow, brighter colours, or some other method you see fit ;p