Tranquility

Post by **Aumaan Anubis** » Fri Jan 30, 2009 2:44 am

Critique and comment.

V2:

Different one:

Zieon Eslador · Post by **Zieon Eslador** » Fri Jan 30, 2009 2:48 am

I always did like that render...

Yellow stands out a bit too much, if it were three colors it wouldn't be as noticeable but with only yellow and white it is way to clear. Cloud is a little too focused, needs more flow.

Still pretty nice seeing as I couldn't ever think of anything to do with that render...

Post by **Aumaan Anubis** » Fri Jan 30, 2009 3:47 am

Updated, sorta' using your suggestions.

Better?

Remnant Samurai · Post by **Remnant Samurai** » Fri Jan 30, 2009 8:39 am

I also like that render alot.

looking really good have you been using photoshop long?

Post by **Aumaan Anubis** » Fri Jan 30, 2009 11:47 pm

RaZoR73 wrote:looking really good have you been using photoshop long?

Not really. I used it awhile back, for a couple days.
And now I've used it again, for a couple days.

Anyway...

Made that one for fun. C&C, as well.

Remnant Samurai · Post by **Remnant Samurai** » Sat Jan 31, 2009 12:22 am

Looks nice

NotZachary82 · Post by **NotZachary82** » Sat Jan 31, 2009 2:08 am

It looks really good. I didn't think you had any talent.

Nice job. I need to catch up with GFX skills.

Zieon Eslador · Post by **Zieon Eslador** » Sat Jan 31, 2009 9:14 pm

Aumaan Anubis wrote:Updated, sorta' using your suggestions.

Better?

Cloud is much better. The blue streaks fit better with the background and help to not focus only on the yellow streaks.

Not going to lie though, probably better than I could do anyway.

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